The Sable Count
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Post by The Sable Count on Oct 19, 2019 12:20:16 GMT -8
Commerce Guild Light Cruiser Ship Class: Frigate Ship Role: Light Cruiser Ship Length: 350 meters Agility (A): 2 Defensive (D): 3 Offensive (O): 3 Speed (S): 4 Special Gear: 2 (Troop Space, Fighter Carrying) Extra Stats: Hyperdrive Rating: 1 Backup: 12 10 Heavy Turbolasers 10 Quad Laser Cannons 10 Ion Cannons 5 Tractor Beams Description: The Commerce Guild Light Cruiser was not dissimilar to Carrack-Class light cruiser in function, with it being very heavy on anti capital ship weapons. However, it did have some anti-starfighter weapons to prevent any attacks by them. The ship could carry 48 fighters, as well as 142 troops.
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Luxeria
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Post by Luxeria on Oct 19, 2019 16:52:38 GMT -8
I believe this would be better rated at a 3 for offense. And squadrons should be adjusted to actual fighter numbers.
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The Sable Count
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Post by The Sable Count on Oct 19, 2019 17:27:09 GMT -8
Edited.
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Post by Luxeria on Oct 19, 2019 17:28:42 GMT -8
I believe in that edit, the defense stat disappeared. But pop that back in and I say approved.
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Post by The Fallen on Oct 19, 2019 17:29:35 GMT -8
Just dropping through, but it also appears you are lacking a defensive stat. Possible something that disappeared when making an edit?
Or Luxeria will get in before I do...
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The Sable Count
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Post by The Sable Count on Oct 19, 2019 17:30:30 GMT -8
Um yeah not sure why that happened:
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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2019 9:37:17 GMT -8
I feel like I've said this before somewhere, lol. Please make sure to follow the format/layout stated in the Submissions guide, found here
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Post by Zion Morviael [RETIRED] on Nov 11, 2019 18:57:58 GMT -8
Other than getting the title and the description bolded, this looks good to me.
APPROVED.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2019 20:29:05 GMT -8
You'll also want to make sure that the extra stats are listed within the description, that way your submission is following the Submissions guide.
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Post by Zion Morviael [RETIRED] on Nov 21, 2019 12:46:59 GMT -8
with Lux and Mine's approval, moving this now.
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