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Post by Valon on Feb 25, 2021 0:11:28 GMT -8
Cautelosa-class CruiserShip Class: Support Ship Role: Stealth Cruiser Ship Length: 64 meters Agility (A): 3 Defensive (D): 3 Offensive (O): 2 Speed (S): 3 Special Gear: 4 (Cloak, Passenger Space, Starfighter Hangar) Description:The Cautelosa-class was produced to fill a need within the Diarchy for a small stealth cruiser that could fill a variety of roles from troop transportation, to covert entry teams, cargo haulage, and much more. The Cautelosa-class was based off the Imperial Gozanti-class Cruiser, maintaining a similar hull and frame shape while also producing a unique look. It has space enough for 20 Passengers/Soldiers and up to 200 tons of cargo. It also features two external docking spots for starfighters and 1 internal hangar bay for a single fighter craft. The Cautelosa-class has a Dorsal Twin Laser Cannon Turret and a Ventral Heavy Laser Cannon Turret, leaving it lightly armed but certainly able to provide a decent enough offense when backed into a corner. The Cautelosa-class also featured an advanced stealth cloak allowing it to cloak itself and the pair of starfighters attached to it.
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Post by Standash Thul on Feb 25, 2021 5:59:15 GMT -8
I would crop the Image. The bottom of the image says "Class Gamma Cargo Ship- Novembre" makes it kind of odd. Cruiser is an odd ship title, because it works in a large variety of classes. It works here as a name in comparison with the Gozanti. I would still reword "Diarchy for a small stealth cruiser that could fill a variety of roles" this section. Maybe replace cruiser her with "Ship"
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Post by Valon on Feb 25, 2021 12:19:48 GMT -8
I mean, the two Gozanti variants could fill a variety of roles as well. They were still called cruisers.
As for the image, I can try get it cropped soon. Definitely seen a small handful of subs with similar text that were left as is.
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Post by Standash Thul on Feb 25, 2021 12:46:09 GMT -8
They were. And its fine in the name. it is just here "Diarchy for a small stealth cruiser that could fill a variety of roles" that i think it could be confusing for some while reading at 3:30 in the morning. I just noticed the text here. The Ship is totaly fine and works good, these were just ideas for cleaning up the submission a bit.
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Post by Valon on Feb 25, 2021 13:11:19 GMT -8
image has been cropped.
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Feb 25, 2021 14:27:05 GMT -8
Just cause the ship is called a cruiser doesn't mean it is a cruiser size. Harrower-class is called a Battlecruiser and a Dreadnought, but its a Star Frigate in size. Yet its not called Harrower-class Star Frigate. In my views, it's fine.
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Post by Valon on Feb 25, 2021 16:36:36 GMT -8
They were. And its fine in the name. it is just here "Diarchy for a small stealth cruiser that could fill a variety of roles" that i think it could be confusing for some while reading at 3:30 in the morning. Honestly, reading anything at 3:30am is going to be confusing for anybody... Not sure why you would be reading it that early. What exactly is the concern/confusion here with the wording exactly?
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Post by Standash Thul on Feb 26, 2021 6:11:10 GMT -8
It was just a thought. Opposition withdrawn. Approved
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Mar 9, 2021 15:00:12 GMT -8
Approved!
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