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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 21:24:46 GMT -8
Lol... you’re talking about taking 10 or so boards down to 1... that’s destroying it. You’re changing the entire thing. To make it what? Another Yavin 4? Another Corillea? Felucia was a military base... not a place to raise your children and train your padawans.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 21:21:52 GMT -8
I can see the decision has already been made.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 20:27:53 GMT -8
Don’t worry about me... I’ll get what I need from Felucia and be off world and out of your hair before the end of the raid. Not gunna stick around and watch you lot destroy my home.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 19:37:30 GMT -8
Felucia’s Base was never built with the intention of what it has been made into, and as such is poorly equipped for it. However the base has been destroyed and rebuilt and added to many times in the past... while I no longer write a Jedi and my opinion obviously means nothing now that you lot have taken over and are making it what you wish, I think that you should leave these locations in place. The base building itself, the balcony, the garden. Those three locations are considered iconic as they were carried over from 1.0, even the Facebook group and have been used many times and always included in He new designs when the base was destroyed. Everything else can be rebuilt or changed as needed. Just my thoughts.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 18:25:48 GMT -8
Something like that yea, when you figure out what you wanna do let me know. I'll be around! *thumbs up*
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 18:23:36 GMT -8
Wasn't a reference to you, no worries...
Also the only reference i can find to a combined security system was when we accessed the bases security during the war with Ramius from a central point. Archive posts - Jedi Base - somewhere around page 940 or so. Gadriel's clones and Gadriel himself when the forces of chaos attacked the base.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 15:08:45 GMT -8
Thank you for that Rawkill I will update my post to take this information into account before proceeding.
Also mike, the base was built and designed by The Felucian conclave - Raven Alora Gadriel’lya zakire jair a few others - and the original base was destroyed and rebuilt when Gadriel’lya, Altair’s General was master librarian, so yes he was part of the team that built or rebuilt the systems. And until Rawkill corrected me I wasn’t aware the system had been changed or upgraded.
Before the system was designed to be accessed anywhere by anyone that could do so, because all of us were equals back then and we were all equally responsible for the bases security. Unlike the common opinion I was not just “waltzing in pretending to own the place”
Rawkill I’ll scoure the archives in my free time to look for what you requested, may take a few days.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 23, 2018 10:29:46 GMT -8
Then like I said, kindly point me to where on the boards the system was redone so I can get her a little bit of history for my posts and fix what I’ve messed up, otherwise I have no choice but to leave it how it stands
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 22, 2018 6:56:32 GMT -8
Miss the part where he has been here before? He grew up on this planet before you even stepped foot on it. He was there when this base was built on 1.5 and he was part of the first armies that secured it. Even if you revamped the system you wouldn’t have changed the base code, and if you did kindly point to it being done one the boards and I’ll redact my post immediately. I have proof of him being here on the old boards which you can gladly scour through at your leisure... he isn’t a prodigy. He is simply well prepared. Pay attention before you get all sassy at me out of character for a simple and kind warning as to the advancement of my storyline here that may include you.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 21, 2018 21:14:26 GMT -8
For all those paying attention to such things... Altair just casually accessed the entire Bases network/computer systems. Not sure if there is any techies among the residence here but i thought i'd point it out (post is on the Cloning and Medbay board if you're curious) Just doing a little bit of light stalking... for now.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 21, 2018 21:11:13 GMT -8
*Cloning Facility - Research and Development*
*Emergency lights flickered on the moment the doors opened, but otherwise the room remained perfectly dark as the figure stalked into room. Lucian and Jez had performed their duty admirably considering their station - they would have made fine ground commanders had their hearts not drawn them to the skies - everything was in perfect order. Casting an eye over the the two disassembled cloning pods they had taken out of Chiss Space with their prisoner, he nodded in appreciation. It wouldn't be long at all before they could begin replicating the rapid growth chambers the Chiss had once used to build bulk command crews for their Star Cruisers. With those pods, and the three artifacts his team had been working on gathering, he would have all he needed to begin testing... With that thought he turned his head to the only real sources of light in the room. Two bright as day isolation chambers against the back wall, with an empty one standing in between. In one rested a perfectly ordinary green Top Hat... from it radiating all the darkness and despair one would feel in the trenches of war. The other quite the opposite, the head tip of a spear, silver and about a foot and a half in length, and from it shown the light of the Sol itself, and all the peace and comfort that could be granted by its heat. Two pieces down... Altair's eyes fell on the center chamber, within rested an empty pedestal one of the like you might rest a book upon.*
"Just one more..."
*His own voice sounded strange to his ears, as if the sound was unwelcome in the silence of the room. Raising the control panel of his wristgaunt he opened the computer that was responsible for running most of the upgrades and enhancements he had made for his armor - its circuitry ran throughout his EV suit, the collapsible armor and helm he wore, even down to the Jet boots and that was only a portion of its capabilities. Moving to the Cloning Facilities central computer he lowered the gauntlet to the terminal and out shot two connection wires - within moments he was into the computers systems and half a moment later he had broken the firewall and slipped through into the bases mainframe network. Kids stuff. Literally it had been, he had written the code he had just used years ago when he still lived here, bored out of is mind in the company of these Jedi... Well, not these... few living here now would remember the boy, and even fewer would recognize the man he had become. Hopefully the one he was searching for was one of the latter. Finally he had what he was looking for - access to the archives, the security feeds, the base defensive network, and the holovid records - a smirk played across his lips...*
"Find her... Find Zendora."
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 21, 2018 20:52:30 GMT -8
Altair is in command of what remains of my first characters army - Gadriel'lya back on 1.0/1.5 - He currently 'claims' to be acting on behalf of the Felucian Conclave... but he hasn't accepted orders from them since Gadriel's death/disappearance (depending on where you stand). Since his return to the known universe he's been fighting in skirmishes against the First Order (Rendilli, Jabiim, Naboo) Trying to get his army back together (Felucia, Nar-Shadda, Rendilli) and up until this point has only succeeded in losing more and more men to a seemingly endless war... that is until the Galactic Alliances rolled over and showed the FO their bellies. He hates this, seeing it as a diss to all the soldiers that have fought and died in the war... so he made his thoughts known on Contruum - where the fledgling "Resistance" (basically all the GA outcasts and scrubs) met to watch the signing of the treaty. I dont really see Altair as a joiner (soldier/assassin/hacker/splicer/pilot/scumbag sure)... but he is definitely on the outer rim of a lot of the goings on to do with the war. As for my Chiss... well... like i said i havn't really started writing him TOO much, i was waiting for a more usable Chiss Playerbase before i started in on him. But he was aboard the 'Everquest' (The ship i spoke of) and no one really knows why... because he is one of the few survivors and he's not talkin about it. (Origionally this Chiss was going to be my Darksider... but that sort of fell through when i found very little motivation to get the Everquest plotline off the ground.) Altair is currently on the cutting edge of cloning tech on Felucia... just where Gadriel was in the formation of his own army years ago. Gadriel made clone twins - (Janus: Altair's pilots and Lucian and Jez:Hammerhead corvette pilots currently on Felucia running his cloning program - dont ask, resources are short) who are capable of simultaneous thought while retaining individual Identity, basically they can think and act as one (think Pacific Rim... ish...) Anyways Altair is looking to One Up the Jedi by making a Super Soldier Clone for the War against the First Order. Which is currently why i've taken over the Cloning Center on Felucia for my experiments/research/holding center. Further information is classified concerning this project... sorry. *smirk* Anyways because of this... Altair would see Kyra (once he realized what it was he had created/discovered/uncovered) as less of a piece of technology and moreso of a fledgling independent lifeform... of some type. Needless to say the interaction would have to define the exact feelings and reactions towards the thing, but more or less Kyra would be an interesting thing/person/droid to have around... especially for all the tech shit i've got planned in the coming future. For Instance
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 19, 2018 16:01:24 GMT -8
My chiss is currently under lockdown on Felucia - his origin story im still holding off on tho... its sorta gunna be like an outbound flight type thing. Where the Chiss develop this technologically advanced ship to explore unknown quadrants of space but something goes wrong and the ship ends up getting stranded in space and everyone aboard dies. Kyra... could be the ships computer.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 18, 2018 16:13:20 GMT -8
Well you mentioned an “origin” story of sorts... so are you going to start our unrestricted or... evolve... to get that way throughout the course of the story?
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 18, 2018 12:44:41 GMT -8
Sounds like a lot of fun, building an A.I. What would her primary function be? Or have you not fleshed out that much of her program yet? I've actually got a start up for this already in place with my character. Sorta like a mix between Cortana, Jarvis, and Data... depending on the situation. Rolling with this you'd basically be an IOs for my characters slicer gauntlet that also controls his targeting array and armor. The program right now is portable and integrates with his ship as well.
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Mar 2, 2018 13:46:45 GMT -8
Rendilli StarDrives Main Hanger Bay
The personal shield that protected the Clone Commando took a heavy beating as he made his way, sluggishly across the hanger floor. The constant fire of the First Order troopers causing him to miss step once or twice, and the rate of his return of fire was dwindling as well. The shield absorbed the brunt of the impact, and even though he was battle trained and hardened any soldier who was wise enough to live this long was wise enough to not trust an shield forever. He couldn't spare a glance back to be sure that Altair and the rest of the RDF was making their escape, could only hope Altair was smart enough to take the opportunity for retreat and save the lives of those that now followed him. His DC-17's quickly overheated - and with a quick motion he holstered them and pulled his rifle from the sling around his back and dove for cover behind a half destroyed pile of munitions crates. ~Great~ he thought to himself coming to his knee and taking aim firing twice before moving again - away from the potentially explosive cover. He finally checked his shield - 15% - and turned and fired again - two shots - met with three more pelting against his shield which was starting to malfunction, one of the three bypassed the shield and slammed into his heavy armor knocking him from his feet and throwing him back into another pile of crates. Not bothering to check what they were he scrambled behind them and deactivated his shield. He was 20 yards from the nearest exit and sparing a glance back he noticed that Altair and the rest of the security force was gone. ~Good, all eyes on me then~ He took a quick breath and considered his next move...
Rendille StarDrives - Corridor
*Altair considered the offer for aide but quickly shook his head, he wouldn't risk the commanders men on such a foolhardy mission. This is why he was here, but they had already gone above their call to duty by staying as long as they have - any commander worthy of the title would know this station was lost.*"I thank you commander, but I'm confident in my men. We'll handle this, Get your men planetside as quickly as possible - down there you might have more of a chance."*He ordered his own men to proceed towards the command center and gave the Security Commander one last nod and a smile that wouldn't have been visible through the face concealing helm he wore."I'm getting what I can out of this station and getting out of this system... I'll send help if I can - you and your men are welcome to come with me?"
Aboard the Gadriel'lora'lya
Sticky orange juices streamed out of the fruit crushed between Nakor's teeth as he held it and half chewed when he could, both of his hands busy with the control conduit above him. Manually rerouting power from the failing life support to the doors - but only those between here and the hanger - bypassing weapons systems and fuel lines where a single spark of a failed power line could set the entire ship ablaze in moments. He could already feel the air growing thin as he ripped the last pair of wires from their homes and without hesitation scrapped them clean and crossed them twirling the ends together and half raising his head towards the door and counting... three seconds later the door opened and he smirked raising a hand to take the fruit from between his lips and took another bite - half limped to his feet and moved towards the door...
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Feb 28, 2018 13:29:02 GMT -8
*Altair's eyes glanced down towards the Datapad and the communications he was sending to the Galactic Alliance. He suppressed the urge to roll his eyes, having recently come from Contruum as well on his tour of highly unfortunate destinations he had the Alliance were not standing on the most solid foundations. Following the Jedi's gaze to his ship he nodded slowly his voice not revealing anything about his own internal struggles with coming back here again.*
"Yes... he's confined at the moment aboard the Star Razer. I did not wish to move him through your base without informing you first. He hasn't been hostile, but he is dangerous - if you catch my meaning."
*He considered for a moment mentioning the other guest he had aboard ship, and inquiring after his target on planet but assumed better of it. This Jedi wouldn't know much if anything of Zendora even if she was still staying on base, and tipping his hand about Paradigm's presence to early might alert the Shilor and tracking her halfway across the universe wasn't big on his to-do list - in fact it was perfectly and completely absent from it.*
"My men and I have the means to relocate him, and you can get to him when you have the time... I am afraid I have interrupted it enough for one day."
*He cast a glance to the other Jedi present, one that may have been intended to convey his apology - but the shadow of exhaustion cloaking his features made it impossible to know for sure.*
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Feb 26, 2018 9:36:15 GMT -8
*Altair moved forward upon finally being addressed crossing the several yards he had kept himself removed to stand nearer the two jedi. His gaze lingered on the newcomer for a short amount of time taking note of his posture and his obvious military background. He nodded very slightly before turning his glance towards the Jedi Master.*
"Masters..."*Altair began wearily*"Jabiim's capital has been blown half to hell by a Sith Lord known as Viox Savage, Rendilli Stardrives has fallen to the First Order Navy, the battle for the planet is... ongoing. I've brought a Prisoner out of the Unknown Regions... a Chiss that may require a Jedi's talents to interrogate. If you desire him alive afterwards that is..."*He hesitated again for a short time but continued before either could speak, perhaps attempting to summon the strength to smirk.*"I've retained the use of one of your force cells to hold a rogue agent of mine, he shouldn't be a danger to the base unless he gets free, my men will see he does not. I advise against anyone speaking with him however."
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Feb 24, 2018 15:53:52 GMT -8
Jez, Stitch and D'lyse 'escorted' their prisoner past the security checkpoints and into one of the isolated force cells below the surface of the detention center. Shadow was not a particularly strong force sensitive, but he had skills that made him impossible to keep hold of in general population. Jez and Stitch seemed on edge but D'lyse only seemed irritated, anger perhaps... but outwordly, perfectly calm. After Shadow was secured his restraints and his gag was removed and Jez and Stitch stepped out of the cell just before the ray shields collapsed trapping him. D'lyse waved his hand and after a moments hesitation from the other two, and a very stern look from their commander they two commandos nodded and returned the way they had come leaving D'lyse and Shadow alone.
Shadow had not even looked up - his wounds from the battle on Jabiim had been looked after on the hyperspace ride here and he had recovered quickly enough, at least from the physical damage done during the failed rebellion in Choal. He had been kept in isolation and Altair had ordered no one to speak with him - Shadow knew the routine, he knew what he had done, and what it had cost him... what it would continue to cost him. D'lyse stood before the cell looking down at the Shadowalker, a mixed look of disappointment, dismay, anger, and confusion written across his face kept from view by the yellow painted helm he wore. They two of them stood there in silence for several moments before finally D'lyse spoke, breaking the silence as well as Altair's gag order.
"How did he die, Marius?"
*Shadow hesitated, not expecting to be addressed by anyone but Altair. Had he known he would be furious, but D'lyse was different... if Altair had not stepped up command would have fallen to D'lyse as the leader of Gadriel's Army. The Shadowalker raised his eyes to meet the stoic visor of the clone commander before him. There was a mixed array of feelings in his eyes, all of them kept from going much further. This was the first conversation he had had with a friendly in close to three years. The deep cover he had been in on Jabiim preceding the rebellion had kept him from speaking to anyone, even Darius. Regardless he could not bring himself to speak and simply lowered his head again remaining silent. The silence held for a long time following that painful moment, regardless of the mask he could tell the mood D'lyse was in, nothing good would have come of that conversation. The next time he summoned the strength to look up, D'lyse was gone.*
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Post by Altair Sirraf on Feb 24, 2018 15:34:42 GMT -8
The Fury-Class Interceptor designated Star Razer dropped its cloak moments before landing - there had been no radio traffic on their entry and sensors would have caught nothing on their entry into the planets atmosphere, giving away knowledge of the planets defenses and the holes within the system. Regardless of the lack of knowledge of the landing an entire squad of Altair's Troopers had sectioned off a space for the Ship within the Hanger and were waiting in full gear, almost like they were ready to receive hostiles - not their own Captain. As the ship began to power down and the docking ramp lowered Altair stalked down the ramp. It looked like he hadn't slept in a month, and the the already lean figure he kept was near gaunt with exhaustion and lack of proper nutrition. He had been deployed for nearly three years now running mission after mission, some himself to give his men the time they needed to recover from their run in with the Chiss in the unknown region and now he looked every bit of half dead himself. Several of them troopers gathered moved forward and saluted, the weary soldier waved away their formality and whispered a soft word to them before turning towards the landing ramp just as his Commando team was disembarking, their weapons trained on a chained and gagged individual wearing the remnants of a Stealth suit that had been removed of nearly all its tech leaving him wearing a dark blue / almost black evo suit with the mask cut away. He had shockingly bright blue eyes and short cut black hair. It was Shadow.
"Take this traitor to the brig..."
*Altair spoke with an air of indifference, as if all the anger and pain he would have normally felt was beyond him at this point in time. He turned to several of the other troopers arranged before him and passed another string of commands among them, and without hesitation they all departed to see to their orders. Only then did the two pilots descend from the landing ramp - also clones... named Janus and they were armed as if standing guard before the docking ramp. Altair approached them wearily whispering.*
"Keep the ship locked down until i can arrange for passage for our other guest..."
*The clones nodded in acknowledgement and stood to attention before the landing ramp their weapons ready. Not even the typical ground crews approached the ship, nothing was done to refit or refuel the craft that had spent to many years in the field without such things. No one touched Altair's ship. Altair himself turned from the two with a soldierly nod and exhaled surveying the state of the Hanger. He noted the YT-2400 and the two Jedi Masters holding conversation before the ships landing ramp. Master Aerandir, just the Jedi he was looking for. Crossing his arms he kept his distance... as tired and frustrated with the estate of things as he was he was not going to encroach into the Jedi's affairs without invitation and so he simply waited - at least for a moment. He doubted his entrance would have gone overlooked - perhaps his remaining presence was enough to inform the Jedi he needed to report in.*
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