Commodore Starkiller
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Post by Commodore Starkiller on Apr 25, 2022 4:12:55 GMT -8
Mechanical Tone It seemed an appropriate avatar since I was writing some dark stuff. Gotta lighten it up where I can, plus little bear people are kinda my thing, lol.
Kryptman ain't around so somebody might as well unleash the full fury of the god emperor.
I figured out what I am gunna do with Starkiller after this. New body for sure. I'm thinking Sith elite warbot because old appliances tend to be better built than new ones. That way he can still be bulky, but minus the inbuilt weapons. Focus more on melee/smashy type combat. I might have Drags show up at the temple to help make it since it would be nice to have some Sith alchemy go into it. Maybe suggest that Drags was compelled to help by the Eye since Starkiller has been such an absolute loyal follower for all these years, also because Drags is fairly selfish and probably wouldn't help otherwise.
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Dread Lord Havok
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Apr 27, 2022 17:37:14 GMT -8
You inject ewoks with alot of character and make them far more interesting to me than they are (in my opinion) in ROTJ.
I've looked into warhammer 40k since then, and so alot more of kyptman's references make sense now. I thought he was mostly doing a helsing thing, just like Major. Boy was I wrong.
so, IG-Lomm doesn't have enough explosives to blow up a cave. are we going to do a mcgyver and improvise an explosive, or are we hijacking starkiller's nuke, and hack out starkiller's physical memory/processor unit? or is IG-lomm temporarily going to download starkiller? Also, does starkiller have the ability to climb up a cave wall and walk on a ceilling? or If there was a vein of magnetic ore in the walls of the cave, could starkiller walk up and over the kinrath?
Once tyna and Eli get to a certain point, an ground-collapsing explosion would be useful to trigger another sinkhole to allow everyone to get back to the surface.
But technically, a Free virgillia bunker buster ship is parked in orbit, with the ability to penetrate subterranean areas with orbital strikes. ;) We just need a way to communicate coordinates to the ship. In addition, the Belphagor victory III class is on its way and will arrive and be parked about 5km from the Waster's crash site, once Havok does his thing. It's how operation goodboy ends. It was going to be a smaller ending, but I have to use the Belphegor (atmospheric capable) instead of the Waster now. LOL.
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Dragus
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Post by Dragus on Apr 28, 2022 9:05:17 GMT -8
Aw, you're just saying that because I named one after ya ;-)
Although I have this humorous scenario in my head where Havok walks into the war room to discover Dragus having a meeting with his furry replication of the high council and being like, "What's going on here? Why is that ewok sitting in my seat? And why does he kinda look like me?", to which Draggy's only real explanation is that he got lonely, lol.
Um, I think we gotta set off the nuke if only because that is gunna be fun to write, although I like the idea of him downloading into IG-LOMM temporarily. That way even though he still explodes, he's still keeping the promise he made not to destroy himself. And then once everything is said and done we can sort out what happens to him.
Or better yet, C-3PO moment. We'll take SK's head off and say he can control his body independently of it, thus blowing up the body but keeping his droid brain intact. The image of him shouting zealous religious nonsense as a disembodied head is too good to pass up.
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Dread Lord Havok
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Apr 28, 2022 12:28:56 GMT -8
Not gunna lie. Lil'havok is my favorite. The funny thing is that Darth Havok doesn't know how to fly ships. He never took the time to learn. That's why he has a favorite pilot that he is willing to rescue. The fact that lil'havok is the pilot is hilarious to me- it means that Lil'havok is actually better at something than the real Havok!
Lomm carrying around a loud fanatic warbot head. I like it.
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Dragus
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Post by Dragus on Apr 29, 2022 16:44:19 GMT -8
Hey, if anyone deserves a chauffer, it's us. We got our reputations to consider. Prolly gunna have Lil'Havok teach Kr'Naan a couple of things around the cockpit. Eye forbid if Draggy finds himself in a situation where he has to drive himself.
I might give SK some impromptu spider legs sprouting out from his neck or something so he's not completely useless, lol.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on May 1, 2022 13:19:05 GMT -8
I took some vacation the past few days. if you've noticed that I have been posting alot, thats why. ;)
The thing is, that between now and July I need to find another job and so after today, I am not going to have alot of time to post bunches. My goal is to do a post every 2-4 weeks, but I'm also probably going to need to move to another city if everything goes right. So. I'm going to do my best. (because I love writing this shit and I especially have been enjoying writing with you. This is actually the longest I have collaborated on a story with you). but I can't guarantee regularity, perhaps other than on holiday weekends through the summer. I'm ok with it, b/c I want to write a really bitchin terentatek fight. Thats going to take some time to write, and plan and write and think, and delete and rewrite some more. LOL.
Just want to say again, that I have been enjoying reading the journey with Dragus and Nartaga.
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Commodore Starkiller
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Post by Commodore Starkiller on May 2, 2022 10:44:53 GMT -8
May Colt strike me down if he ever reads this, but I think Eli is more Kryptman than Kryptman was, lol. I definitely need to see more of that character.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on May 2, 2022 16:01:52 GMT -8
I am really glad you like him. This is only probably my 3rd attempt at working on Eli's personality and character concept. If you were curious want to read some more of an earlier version of him, here is his major debute on this version of the website. He kinda tries to be more of a preacher/ nurturing type... But yeah, I call one of his powers "absolute conviction." It allows him to work to convert planets. boards.jedivsith.com/thread/511/high-port?page=11And then continues here... boards.jedivsith.com/thread/509/harnaidan?page=18Ever read the berzerk manga? Mozgus is how I imagine bro eli appearing. |
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Post by Dragus on May 11, 2022 8:05:36 GMT -8
I'm seen a couple of the berzerk animated movies. The only character I can remember was the main guy with the giant sword.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on May 29, 2022 7:17:23 GMT -8
Boom. Got that fresh post up for ya.
And don't be alarmed. Ever thought about how much IG series droids look like the humping robot from robot chicken? IG-Lomm occasionally violates other computers with his probe, that dirty droid and his dirty thoughts! LOL! I can delete/alter it if you think it is in bad taste.
Can't wait to read what happens next on Rishi or in the Temple topic between Dragus and the returning apprentice. :)
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 11, 2022 7:44:43 GMT -8
Did you want starkiller to do a post, or are you ok waiting until Lomm rejoins Tyna?
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Post by Dragus on Jun 11, 2022 9:38:40 GMT -8
Every time I looked over at the board you had posts up saying 'work in progress'. I thought you were still working away at it. I might as well wait at this point, or if not I can probably get a post up tomorrow.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 11, 2022 11:35:45 GMT -8
I do have works in progress, but don't let that stop you from interacting with the characters that starkiller is interacting with. The people in the lifepod, and Havok are not in the sphere of causality underground yet, at least not until starkiller busts his self destruct nut. LOL. At least that's how I have been thinking about it.
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Post by Dragus on Jun 12, 2022 12:49:37 GMT -8
Hey, sorry man. I said I was going to get a post up today but I didn't budget my time well and now the day has gotten away from me. I'll pick away at it over the next few days though so I should hopefully have something up by Wednesday.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 12, 2022 14:09:12 GMT -8
No hurry man. No worries man. I have a job interview this week and I'd be lucky to get on this site until next weekend, between work, travel, exercise, and other things. I honestly asked about starkiller just because I was feeling insecure about how you might interpret me RPing him slightly in my post. Even if you posted an hour ago, I wouldn't be able to do another post for a week, or two... or three. But I'll still read it an enjoy it. Just like I have continued enjoying your Rp on Rishi with nartaga.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 18, 2022 18:15:25 GMT -8
If you want to take over Lomm completely, feel free. Havok has more IG-Lomms stashed away, and Lomm is backed up on SSE servers. Up to you.
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Post by Nem Yin on Jun 19, 2022 4:38:00 GMT -8
Hmmm, well maybe then. I was gunna try to just make it temporary since I wasn't sure how important he was, but if there are spares  |
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 19, 2022 7:12:56 GMT -8
Well, you were planning on making a new body. You might still need to. So, presenting a range of options. SK controls the body and Lomm is gone, or Sk and Lomm both have some control over the body, but not total control over the body, or Sk controls the body completely and Lomm is present as a voice or commentary in SK's head.
Lomm is the equivalent of Havok's personal laptop. The data (and personality) is backed up to the point when Lomm went underground. Havok can download Lomm into another frame, but Lomm wouldn't remember interacting with starkiller, unless Lomm (in the body with Sk) survives and re-syncs with Lomm's servers, which he can't until his body is reclaimed and repaired by the SSE.
I'll make the story work regardless of what happens to Lomm. So be creative, and know that Lomm has recently tried to kill Tyna and Eli, and has been accused (falsely) of destroying the Spook.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 19, 2022 7:34:48 GMT -8
Just a question, cause I'm curious. Do you listen to music while you write? Also, do you have songs that are like themes for your characters? Cause I do. Just wondering if I am weird. If your characters had theme songs I'd wonder what they were.
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Post by Dread Lord Havok on Jun 19, 2022 7:36:00 GMT -8
alternate death of Ives.
Havok pointed the slug-thrower at Ives.
"hey there..." The young man smiled, with his hands open, to show he wasn't a threat.
"Woah! Stand down soldier!" Leno protested.
Without a word, Havok shot the young man in the head. They watched Ives crumple, like marrionette with its strings cut.
"HEY! WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?!!" Leno shouted, liftimg his bowcaster to point it at the operator. "Drop it! Drop the Weapon!"
Havok was already pointing his rifle at Leno, his eyes milky white.
"Lets all just... just calm down." Faust was pleading with Leno. "Sir, put the weapon down. You're not going to win going up against Agent Quasar."
"He just shot Ives! The hell I'm going to calm down!"
Havok stood silent with his rifle pointed at Leno.
Faust pointed his blaster at Leno. "Sir. Put the bowcaster down. You have no idea what Agent Quasar is capable of. If anyone explained it to you, we'd have to kill you."
"Faust you peice of shit." Leno lowered his weapon. "So what is this, a mutiny?"
Havok fired cleanly through Leno's head.
"Wha-!?" The shot took Faust by surprise. "What?"
Darth Havok's eyes ceased their faint glow and darkened. He lowered his rifle and slung it over his shoulder.
"I'm tired of explaining the interests of the Empire to individuals without perspective."
"What?"
"I'll explain it to you this once. Ensign Ives's error was responcible for the loss of the Spook. He was incompetent. Today it was the Spook lost. Tomorrow it would be a star destroyer lost."
It was a bit much to take in. Ives, with his faults, was a likable guy, fresh out of the acadamy. Of course he was going to make mistakes, but... to write him off completely?
"No. He was just a kid. People make mistakes. The ship was Captain Earlfin's responcibility. It was his failure" Faust knew that was how leadership and command works.
"Flying Officer Faust, You are capable and competent. The empire is stronger because of you. Leno was capable and competent, the empire would have been stronger with him. But not if he is unable to do what is necessary-."
"Then what? Then he deserved to die?"
"Then he is replacable. By another who is capable and competent and able to do what is necessary." Havok's tone had an edge in it that silenced Faust.
"What do i know. I'm just a pilot. I fly you everywhere you go."
"That was the deal. That was the power I gave you."
"Well the power you gave me also made it so I never lose a bet at pazaak. I cleaned out a lowlife casino in the underworld on corescant. I even started trying to lose, but I can't."
Havok sneered at Faust. "What, has my gift taken all your joy away? Your excitement? You wanted luck, and I gave it to you."
"I didn't realize I was making a deal with the devil."
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